Comments on: Friday Snippet ~ Cena Apicius: Revelation http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/ Crystal King on Creativity, Thinking, Writing & More Sun, 18 Oct 2009 05:02:36 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: MerylF http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-609 MerylF Sat, 13 Oct 2007 03:32:54 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-609 Ooo-er! You can't leave it there! What happens next? Ooo-er! You can’t leave it there! What happens next?

]]> By: cherylp http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-608 cherylp Fri, 12 Oct 2007 20:24:40 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-608 Dang it! I hope Apicius brains that guy! Can he do it and make it look like an accident? Dang it! I hope Apicius brains that guy! Can he do it and make it look like an accident?

]]> By: Jess http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-607 Jess Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:42:10 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-607 I really thought you were going to have him release the dog when he wasn't supposed to and get in tons of trouble. but then that guy showing up is probably a lot more conflict. O.o I really thought you were going to have him release the dog when he wasn’t supposed to and get in tons of trouble. but then that guy showing up is probably a lot more conflict. O.o

]]> By: Gabriele http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-606 Gabriele Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:20:25 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-606 Ouch, that guy again. I really wonder if Apicius gets it this time. :) Btw, I think, 'if he's ok with it' is too modern. What about 'fine' instead of ok? Ouch, that guy again. I really wonder if Apicius gets it this time. :)

Btw, I think, ‘if he’s ok with it’ is too modern. What about ‘fine’ instead of ok?

]]> By: Tim King http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-605 Tim King Fri, 12 Oct 2007 15:10:18 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-605 Hi, Crystal. Great detail, as usual. There were places during the passage in which I didn't understand the conflict, and so I started to lose interest. But overall quite readable. "He tried another tact." That should be "another <em>tack</em>." :) -TimK Hi, Crystal. Great detail, as usual. There were places during the passage in which I didn’t understand the conflict, and so I started to lose interest. But overall quite readable.

“He tried another tact.” That should be “another tack.” :)

-TimK

]]> By: Joely http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-604 Joely Fri, 12 Oct 2007 14:30:00 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-604 I'm with Bri--I want to know what that fig sign is. :D What a cliffhanger, too! Ack! I’m with Bri–I want to know what that fig sign is. :D What a cliffhanger, too! Ack!

]]> By: IanT http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-603 IanT Fri, 12 Oct 2007 13:39:39 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-603 Great historical detail as always, without it impinging on the story. Somehow your prose is very precise. And good cliffhanger. :-) Great historical detail as always, without it impinging on the story. Somehow your prose is very precise. And good cliffhanger. :-)

]]> By: Bri http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-602 Bri Fri, 12 Oct 2007 13:05:42 +0000 http://crystalking.wordpress.com/2007/10/12/friday-snippet-cena-apicius-revelation/#comment-602 Oh noes. That last line is terrible! What happens? :D Also, the double implications of sign of the fig made me laugh - what does the sign look like? I love cultural references like that. Nice snippet. Oh noes. That last line is terrible! What happens? :D Also, the double implications of sign of the fig made me laugh – what does the sign look like? I love cultural references like that. Nice snippet.

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